The graphs display the number of people particularly students at Zayed University on Tuesday 28th of May who are contribute to keep their environment in different methods.
In general , the highest proportion of students who think recycle is very important and useful are 18 people while the lowest number of students who think there is no responsibility for individual people to 0%. It is obvious that the diagrams are divided to the ten questions .
There are big difference between the people who said the most pollution locate in the urban residential to 18 students while the villages to the 2 students. The students believe the noise is some sort of pollution but less than half said is not sort of pollution and other things are important which led to the exit the pollution such as cars are main source of noise reached to 10students . The proportion of students disagree that the cigarette can pollute the environment is nearly twice than students who are agree that (12,8 respectively)
There are some areas the students have the same numbers .The number of students who prefer watering the trees by tubes is similarly, the students who watering the trees by using spray(`10 students). Keeping environment is responsibility everyone and people produce a lot of pollution on the earth by consuming the products.
nice to see your work fatima
ReplyDeleteyour paragraph is good, but you must focus more on the purpose of this body paragraph
good luck
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Hi Fatima
ReplyDeleteThis paragraph (?) needs a solid topic sentence. What is the topic of this paragraph ... its purpose? State it clearly and then.. give us details on how you collected data to help you answer "this purpose". Nouf picked up on this point very well.
Once that is in place, you will need to rework this paragraph so that it more clearly states your findings.