Topic that I choose is the first one.
Introduction:
in this essay will discuss, what’s the meaning of identity and how the media can affects the identity positively or negatively.
Body 1..
Main idea 1:
The national identity definition.
• In the past, stalin put a definition for a nation .
Body 2..
Main idea 1:
Topic: The positive contribution of media for national identity.
• The benefits that save our tradition in many medias such as “traditional magazine”
(Dialect and National Identity)
• Protecting our language ( like in musalsal FREEJ )
(About FREEJ. (n.d.). Retrieved 26 January, 2008 from)
Body 3...
Topic :The negative effects that destroy national identity in tradition and behavior.
• The negative effects of violent in TV programs in US ( in person’s behavior ).
• The negative effect of the American series on Arab ( language ) especially ( Egypt ) .
Conclusion:
Summary, national identity is that thing which requires
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Hi Fatima
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Be very careful. Your introductory paragraph is not clearly connected to your question - i.e. there is no mention of national identity. There is not enough work done on topic sentences and content for each paragraph. Please review this carefully.